(05-01-2010)
The dark skies seem darker,
The Sun has looked away,
All thoughts in my mind,
Have changed today.
Hope lies restless,
Like the flicker of a candle flame,
The walls around are broken,
The doors of my heart open..
For all i know we have,
Always tried with all our might.
Our will is all ours,
We’ve stopped to see the wonders that we sight.
When the roads were all open,
Have we failed to leap that extra mile?
And now we are far behind, so far..
Its the dawn of darkness now,
The fading of the stars.
Arsh.
(To be continued)
sore wa ii desu(that is a good one)
ReplyDeletewith each dawn comes a new challenge
fading of stars may denote the beginning of a bright new day BUT it may also denote the fear of an unseen day
ganbatte
keep writing:D
oh boi...sad but nice one arsh..n i see kai's comments n think how intelligent this young girl is!!! :)
ReplyDeletenams
thanks nams.... yep a dark kind of poem i wud say... sometimes i write them:-)
ReplyDeleteAbt kai, :-) good she is:-)