Monday, September 13, 2010

A Murder of Time!


{Feelin sorry for what mankind has done to this beautiful Earth,
In order to live his dreams, Man has destroyed Her's}


Looking far and wide,
My vision now collides,
A thing, hard to recognize,
In its own disguise,
Laughing at the wise,
I don’t know what to say,
As many thirsty spies,
Are looting HER away.

Soon there’ll be no cries,
And neither birds nor flies,
I know it all today,
That there’ll be no way,
No fishing at the bay,
No earthly bond to bind,
And SHE’LL be ready to slay,
A Murder of its kind ! ! !

We’ll never be all that gay,
As an angry tide,
Can wipe us all away,
Leaving none behind,
And so SHE’LL find a way,
To stop her own slay,
Can you get away,
After committing such a crime ?

So think again twice,
And see that you be wise,
To stop this slaughter and slay,
Before the time slips away,
Coz then you’ll regret,
When SHE be in distress,
And will surely do HER best,
SHE’LL put us all to REST ! ! !
.....Arsh.

5 comments:

  1. sou desu ne(thats right)
    im kinda wonderin wat wil change in humans after centuries the way apes changed into human u know
    sadly 2day i saw an injured pigeon on the opposite side of the highway n no 1 was bothered 2 attend 2 it
    i hope the day never comes wen such wings of humans(freedom)r slaughtered by the inhumanity of the humans
    idont know about others but im sure i dont want the darkness to reach my eyes b4 the light of my dreams

    ganbatte

    keep writing:D

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  2. Thanks kai for that very thoughtful review. i agree, i hope the day never comes when human race is fallen like that pigeon... i certainly wish that darkness doesnot reach our Mother before new generations see the light.
    really good comment. thanks.
    Regards.
    Arsh.

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  3. very very powerful poem..especially in its closing lines.. awesome..
    first i cdnt understand wat it was about but was surprised when came to know what big issue it was dealing with..
    superb writing..
    powerful message too..yes we all must keep that in mind..we are all destroying this beautiful planet but there is a limit to which it can take..n when it will decide take a revenge, no one is gonna like that.. better be careful..
    loved this one arsh..

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  4. thanks nams for the review.... i know, we both have been influenced by the same thought some time of the other through different modes...
    This is something i wrote in our 2nd mbbs and i was very happy that i cud convey the anger completely in very harsh words... regards, arsh.

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  5. i guess i had posted it on fb:-) Thanks. i guess i am.he he. :-)

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