Too many thoughts
In my mind
Keep me awake
All night.
I don't sleep
Anymore
To keep my dreams
In my sight
Though you think that i’m
Going farther away from you.
Its so sad that you think
My love for you is untrue.
You don't believe me anymore,
Yet i am knockin your door.
Though i lie to this world
My love for you is pure.
I’ll hold on as you leave,
My soul you did thieve,
Yes i believe you will return
When you realise
My love for you remains uncompromised.
You slip away,
I don’t regret this,
In any way.
I smile silently,
On my fate.
Too much time for me,
To hate..
Though you think that my,
Relationships don’t go through.
Its so sad that you think
My love for you is untrue.
You dont believe me anymore,
Yet i am knockin your door.
Though i lie to this world
My love for you is pure.
I’ll hold on as you leave,
My soul you did thieve,
Yes i believe you will return
When you realise
My love for you remains uncompromised.
hey nice one...romantic...but a lil sad :(
ReplyDeletepoor guy...but...still says "I smile silently,
On my fate.
Too much time for me,
To hate." :)
nice nice
-saranga
he he:-) thnks Saroj:-).. i dont know how this one came to my mind.. but the tune that came was really nice. coming soon:-)
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Arsh.
sad but good one
ReplyDeleteits like if jason bourne would hav tried to convince his wife that his identity might b fake but his feelings 4 her r not
ganbatte
keep writing:D
aw.. sad but sweet.. really i wonder how you thought of such a poem!!!..of course there are some depths in everyone's mind that others can't reach..not even close friends.. but i wd like to believe that u didn't actually have to go through something bad as said in this poem to derive the inspiration for the poem :( ..but sweet poem as i earlier said..nice one :)
ReplyDelete@nams, well:-) its a fiction...with gods grace i have not faced such a situation and i hope i dont need to face it... thanks.. just the rhythm came and so came the words.....
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